Example of analysis of an issue essay: score 1
Last updated: 13 Oct 2008
"Money is the root of all evil"
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the opinion above. Support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience, observations, or reading.
Money is not root of all evil.Bill Gates one of the richest individual 's in the world the help of his money is contributing a lot to the society by giving millions of dollars in charity. I would say greed for money is the root of all evils. Everyone is responsible for his/her deeds. Had it not been any incentive for working human race would have been lazy and there would have been no innovation. Money has led to innovation and hard work.Mother Teressa had no monetary gains in serving the society but she sacrificed all her life. On the other hand Hitler was greedy for power it was not money that motivated him to commit crime against the Jews.A labourer works day and night and in return he gets money had there been no incentive for him to work why would he work day and night. Extensive research is possible only because of the money available. There is no denying the fact that money leeds to greed and in turn commiting crimes but it depends upon every individual, money is not responsible but an individual is the root of all evil. Whoever plants the seed of evil is responsible not the result itself.
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This essay receives a 1.
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